Sunday, October 31, 2010

Impulse

A rebellious community rose up against their country, and has been fighting the army. General Stafford wishes to find and put a stop to the cummunity.

Private Williams: General!

General Stafford: What is it Private?

Williams: Our scouts have received information about the rebels hiding place.

Stafford: Perfect opportunity... What have they found out?

Williams: Their base is north from here; ninety-seven kilos.

Stafford: ...

Williams: We have prepared a strike team. What are your orders?

Stafford: Good! Have the community's defenses bombed, then send in the cavalry for final strike.

Williams: 10-4

1 comment:

  1. Action: The General wants to know where the rebellious community is so he can deal with the problem.

    Conflict: The General doesn't want to be bothered by the private, who knows where the community is.

    Event: He is annoyed at first, but becomes happy once he finally finds out where the community lies, and can deal with the situation.

    Changes: Could have made it longer and gave more detail on what is happening in this seen. The conversation should have lasted longer; so that the private argues, with the general on his decision, about how it is unethical.

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